i made this song in mid march while i was bored. i used FL studio 8 XXL with vengeance essential club sounds. it took me a week to make this so tell me what u think.

pretty good, i use flstudio to make stuff too but havent really completed anything since i love to just keep starting new projects with new formats of songs x_X

me << loves to analyze songs and their formats etc!

your song is nice! although the melody change at 3:28 kinda threw me off. maybe a little more inbetween the two melodies to fuse em together more nicely.

but all in all thats good stuff! make more songs (IMG:http://www.glowsticking.com/forums/style_emoticons/default/biggrin.gif)

I like the song overall but you need to do some tweaking on your EQs. There's a good bit of noise cancellation in some parts of the song because the frequencies don't mesh well.

The change up at 3:28 is not something I like. The lead instrument doesn't fit and just sends shivers up my spine.

The bass line has a real grungy feel and I'd like to see it more punchy. That's the source of some of your noise cancellation and, if left alone, definitely needs to have some adjustments to the EQing on that instrument.

I like the song, but like CybrPunk said, make some minor changes with your EQ's. As for the bass line, I would prefer it to have its volume lowered, especially in the beginning, the bassline overpowers the rest of the song.
As for the change at 3:28, I do not like that sound at all, I'm sorry, but that's just my opinion. This may be due to the fact that it differs so much from the first part, so maybe make the transition a bit smoother.
Other than that, it sure sounds nice =)