hey guys, i just hit my 1 year mark, and i've made my video; i put all of the details in my youtube description. (hopefully this is the right place to announce my video) So yeah, check it out, rate, comment, critique, subscribe, do whatever you feel. Tell me what you think!

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nice vid
well a couple things
your crossers- you dont really need to tuck in that arm under your pit. you can just rest it above your other arm
another thing try to expand those moves you do
incorporate some combos - leg wraps, arm wraps, traces, stalls, utl, btb
aswell it seems like your scared or uncomftorable
loosen up and have fun with it
if you get hit just keep goingg
also throughout yur vid you repeated many moves
next time editing try to cut out repeats
all criticism i got
besides that great vid
keep it up =]

Criticism: I agree with Tivy, this video has a lot of nice stuff, but it could have all been condensed to a minute or 2, with all repeats thrown aside.

Liked: Your poi looks really clean, i don't spend much time on poi... but i can tell you do, but that just leaves more room to expand on wraps =D

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dude that was awesome. i have no criticism to offer because your way better than me. keep at it

Pretty Cool man.
Play around with some flowers and Iso's

grats on making a year, here's to many more~ (IMG:http://www.glowsticking.com/forums/style_emoticons/default/smilewinkgrin.gif)

anywais on to the critique...
your style looks very move oriented. like, you do this then this then this then this. it doesn't flow very readily, and especially when you repeat a move 2-3 times before switching.

the vid was also a little on the long side which is probably a side effect of repeating each move 2-3 times over. try and cut down your vids to maybe 3min or so.

aside from that it looks mostly good, you've got a strong foundation to build off of, i cant wait to see what you do in the future (IMG:http://www.glowsticking.com/forums/style_emoticons/default/D.gif)

Good foundation but too long.



Agreed. You are more going through the motions than truly performing but all of that will come in time. Poi is clean but you can certainly grow. (as we all can)

Keep at it.

thanks guys! yeah, i realized that i made this way too long while i was editing it; so the next thing i'll be working on is making combos, and flowing between tricks/combos so i won't be repeating so much.

my crossers are like that i think because i tried learning straight jacket, and that's what i got so far... i'll have to clean that up. as far as relaxing and loosening up, i'm still working on that (IMG:http://www.glowsticking.com/forums/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) oh, and i'm hoping to learn isolations next... any good tutorials come to mind?

thanks for the comments/critiques! glad to know the lighting and angle was okay, that's something i've had issues with...

you can do a lot of things with the moves that you can already do. it's a matter of connecting all of them and you can make the video more appealing =] you should try learning this way:

learn a move
master the move
combine the move with a weave, arm wrap, vice versa and puzzle around and play with it

start expressing yourself man! we be dancing at raves! congrats on a year of hard work.