this is one of my newest songs that i made with fl studio
enjoy!

sorry that its just the same picture the whole time lol so just bear with me lol

um does any one know how to just put the vid in the thread so i can know for next time? lol

Link is broken.

correct link, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JRWA7s4_zEA
and to embed video put [ video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JRWA7s4_zEA[ /video](no spaces though)

thank you!!!! (IMG:http://www.glowsticking.com/forums/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

i fixed it (IMG:http://www.glowsticking.com/forums/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)

The intro was nice.
The build up with the keys on 3:45 was nice too. Not as touchy as the intro though! You can definitely do some additional experimenting with that concept and i'm sure bring out a lot of interesting stuff!
The rest of the track was meh, but definitely heading into the correct direction with creating tunes from FL. Also it had a bit of an "old-trance' flavor. Perhaps change a couple instruments around? Just my two cents on that.
And the ending typical, fast, and smooth (IMG:http://www.glowsticking.com/forums/style_emoticons/default/wink.gif)

Coolies overall though. Is this a finalize version?

no this is not the final version lol i just came up with the track and that was my first edit of the song i decided to put it up on youtube just because i didnt have anything new for a while. ill put up what i believe to be my best song and you can check it out if not its called remember by me dj solar flare. its already up on youtube

thanks!

I like the song a lot.

from a technical standpoint, there are a lot of phase issues with the low drums and the melody and some of the sound effects. You also have a lot of distortion going on.

I suggest a lot of compression of the Main Kick drum, and you may wanna EQ some a bit of the mid-highs of it out as well, to give room for the other instruments to breathe.

Also, there is a lot of mess in the high end as well, mainly with the hi-hats. try to clean that up too.

and throw some panning in there as well, to add some more elements

Overall, excellent song. ^^

Cool stuff, what do you use to make your music?

i use fl studio xxl8

haha thanks. i just got started with fl like 5 months ago? i think idk lol thanks for the advise this song wasnt the final edit anyways lol it was the first edit that i did i just wanted to put it up to let you guys know i make music. ill post up an other song that i believe to be my best but you seem to give the best critizism (which i need) rather than praise lol like on myspace no one cares thats why i love GS.c like im new to the site and everyone is just so friendly lol but yeah ill post up a new one right now so keep and eye out