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> POSSIBLY MY BEST SONG???, -DJ SOLAR FLARE

djsolarflare
post Jul 1 2009, 11:22 AM
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PLEASE CRITIQUE MY WORK (IMG:http://www.glowsticking.com/forums/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) IT WOULD BE OF MUCH HELP IVE ONLY BEEN PRODUCING FOR LIKE 5 MONTHS AND I REALLY THINK I GOT WHAT IT TAKES TO BE A TRANCE PRODUCER BUT IM GOING TO NEED YOUR HELP (IMG:http://www.glowsticking.com/forums/style_emoticons/default/wink.gif) oh and there is one of the most crappiest transitions btwn melody 1 and 2 so please i know thats there no need to mention it k lol



This is one of my latest songs i released it on mothersday for my mom who passed away when i was only 3. I put alot of my heart into this song and i hope that you guys will enjoy it!
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-Dj Solar Flare


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cyanide66: hey as long as it glows right?

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euphoriaL337 (11:55:31 PM): ok now its getting kinda gay
euphoriaL337 (11:55:32 PM): lol
Jinsmyles (11:55:42 PM): lol we should touch wee wees
Jinsmyles (11:55:44 PM): wait what?
Jinsmyles (11:55:49 PM): *cough*
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post Jul 1 2009, 12:20 PM
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This song is amazing "status" good work i must have it. the intro pulled me in to it right away


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post Jul 1 2009, 12:26 PM
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You've got a long way to go to being a producer. But nice beginnings. Your synths all sound like presets, so you've definitely got to work on creating new sounds of your own. And trance songs have a certain structure in order to make them mixable in DJ sets- try to add at least 1.5 minutes to the beginnng & end of every track to make them transition smoothly.

And you said it yourself-- the transition between "melodies" wasn't smooth. If you know this and notice it, work on it instead of settling for less than what you can do. Better than your other song, I suppose, but the progression wasn't stellar.

Good luck!


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post Jul 1 2009, 01:45 PM
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QUOTE (Lira @ Jul 1 2009, 01:26 PM) *
You've got a long way to go to being a producer. But nice beginnings. Your synths all sound like presets, so you've definitely got to work on creating new sounds of your own. And trance songs have a certain structure in order to make them mixable in DJ sets- try to add at least 1.5 minutes to the beginnng & end of every track to make them transition smoothly.

And you said it yourself-- the transition between "melodies" wasn't smooth. If you know this and notice it, work on it instead of settling for less than what you can do. Better than your other song, I suppose, but the progression wasn't stellar.

Good luck!


thanks i know that i have a long way to go but i really beleive that this is where i belong. i dont want some job in a cubicle or at some random ass gas station. i wanna be making music for the rest of my life lol. ppl always start somewhere im just hoping where i am today will get me to where i want tommorro. (IMG:http://www.glowsticking.com/forums/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif) thanks for the support i should be working on the edits of these songs soon and hopefully will be up in a bit (IMG:http://www.glowsticking.com/forums/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)


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cyanide66: hey as long as it glows right?

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euphoriaL337 (11:55:31 PM): ok now its getting kinda gay
euphoriaL337 (11:55:32 PM): lol
Jinsmyles (11:55:42 PM): lol we should touch wee wees
Jinsmyles (11:55:44 PM): wait what?
Jinsmyles (11:55:49 PM): *cough*
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post Jul 1 2009, 01:58 PM
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As I said on your last song and as said above by lira; nice on the intros, but there is some kind of "sound" that is missing. You'll def get it though, you told me the other day you're feeling confidence on developing your own style so let that take you off! Also talking about style i kind felt like the style of this song was split! As if it was telling me three stories. I'm sure you can figure where... perhaps it can be divided into multiple songs (EP) or something :-p
music is an art and definitely worth playing around / experimenting with a lot! That's just an idea coming from me ^^

About having a long way on being producer, maybe or maybe not. Some very simple tracks get produce and released into the wild and get remixed into beautiful flowers. It's just the matter of being in the right hands at the right time.
You're definitely going in the right direction though.

My advice/feedback to you is to keep all these versions and with more time, skill, instruments, and ideas, you'll be able to remaster them and release some decent material ;-) that's if you don't stop. It's the path i'm working on and it's long, scary, and dark.

Overall not bad mate (IMG:http://www.glowsticking.com/forums/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)


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djsolarflare
post Jul 1 2009, 04:17 PM
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QUOTE (Straat @ Jul 1 2009, 01:58 PM) *
As I said on your last song and as said above by lira; nice on the intros, but there is some kind of "sound" that is missing. You'll def get it though, you told me the other day you're feeling confidence on developing your own style so let that take you off! Also talking about style i kind felt like the style of this song was split! As if it was telling me three stories. I'm sure you can figure where... perhaps it can be divided into multiple songs (EP) or something :-p
music is an art and definitely worth playing around / experimenting with a lot! That's just an idea coming from me ^^

About having a long way on being producer, maybe or maybe not. Some very simple tracks get produce and released into the wild and get remixed into beautiful flowers. It's just the matter of being in the right hands at the right time.
You're definitely going in the right direction though.

My advice/feedback to you is to keep all these versions and with more time, skill, instruments, and ideas, you'll be able to remaster them and release some decent material ;-) that's if you don't stop. It's the path i'm working on and it's long, scary, and dark.

Overall not bad mate (IMG:http://www.glowsticking.com/forums/style_emoticons/default/smile.gif)



thanks man.and i wont stop its soo fun and its my obsession my first love lol other than glowstringing lol.

i love that i actually get feedback on here rather than myspace lol i love GS.c lol


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cyanide66: hey as long as it glows right?

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euphoriaL337 (11:55:31 PM): ok now its getting kinda gay
euphoriaL337 (11:55:32 PM): lol
Jinsmyles (11:55:42 PM): lol we should touch wee wees
Jinsmyles (11:55:44 PM): wait what?
Jinsmyles (11:55:49 PM): *cough*
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post Jul 3 2009, 04:31 PM
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mmmm so catchy, i love it. You really are talented at this stuff, im sure ur mom would've loved this for mothers day :-)


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post Jul 3 2009, 10:02 PM
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QUOTE (Xlectik67 @ Jul 3 2009, 06:31 PM) *
mmmm so catchy, i love it. You really are talented at this stuff, im sure ur mom would've loved this for mothers day :-)


^^i totally agree


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