As you can see I am new at this. Tell me what you think! Any ideas/suggestions?

I would suggest you work on your planes.

and a tip, if your doing weaves and such, you want to have your side facing the camera, but when your doing wraps or butterflies, you wanto be facing the camera.

very good for one week, keep it up.

lighting.
you need some light in ur background.
Its really hard to see what your doing.
But since iv been GLowsticking for a while. i can already tell or assume what you where doing.

Keep practicing and play around with Lights in ur Backgound of your video.
Not when ur editing it. when ur recording...

Hey man very awesome for 1 week! At 23 seconds or so while doing a 3 beat weave you lose your plane when coming towards the right side. I would say even though this is accidental right now work with that! Definitely get the planes on wheel for the weave, but as a begginer there is so much that just comes naturally that you dont want to miss out on while creating a style all your own. Work on the floor plane stuff cuz it can be sick, especially with plane bending, which is what you are unconsiously doing there. You also do it coming back at 29 seconds. I see a lot of potential there. Keep spinnin'!

That was pretty good for a weeks worth of work.

1. Slow down a little bit. Your plane control can use some work so going slower will help teach you how to control your strings better.

2. You have a nice amount of moves down, you just need to work on cleaning them up. Slowing down will also help your weaves, butterflys, and windmills look better because you will have better control over them.

3. The lights was a little bit too dark as well, and that can be easily corrected.

You have some of the basics down you just need to start to fine tune your work. Make sure to use the tutorials on GS.C because they are all done by good people and they will explain everything very well.

Keep up the good work.