http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZQk0DjP1or8


this is my first stinging video tell me what you think!

how long have you been stringing??

umm, nothing really to say besides awesome stuff man.

i am coming up on my 1 year mark here pretty soon in the next month, glad you liked the video

very good dude, youve picked up alot since i've left.

Like i told you on AIM im glad to see you include all three elements of stringing, now its just a matter of getting all three to start meshing =3

Cant wait to see your one year vid, cuz i know youre gonna practice like crazy for it =D

thanks dude if it wasn't for you i wouldn't be nearly as good!!! and you know i HAVE TO PRACTICE for my one year, i should have some kinks worked out my then

great video dude. a lot of good stuff i liked the behind the backs wraps(w/e the are called) you managed to keep your planes pretty straight. my biggest critique is that u should get more into your stringing. Move around some don't just stand still. At times it looks like you are just going through the motions dont be afraid to let loose.

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those btb wraps with the aerial combo thing you did at 0:36 was awesome crosser wraps at 0:55 where sick extension wraps / knee wraps where sick amazing utl those stalls to what i can only describe as butterflies at 2:38 one of the sickest things ive seen in a long time crosser fountain thing was cool hadnt seen one of those in a while and ily coroosers excelent isolation control. however @ 6:33 clean up the begginning of this manip but rest of it is pretty sick and work on your buzzsay hybrid utl at the end was a little sloppy

overall amazing video which is why im pretty sure everyone has just said great vid, because very thing was over all very solid!

Looking very good for almost a year.

One thing you might want to consider is to shorten your future videos. When you start to make long 8 minute videos things can get repetative.

I enjoyed the different poi moves that you were using, the way you move reminds me a bit of sparrow.

One last thing is when you get into some of your moves you tend to repeat them for like 10 seconds, you might want to short the time of some of your moves and move on to something else,


All in all very good

Keep up the good work

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Great video dude.
The butterfly thing that you did were both sticks go btb is sick
Really diggin your bonzai concepts as well.
The only critique that i have is that your split time on some of your moves gets a little sloppy but other then that you have come such a long way from since you started man and i cant wait to see you again:)

WERE ARE YOUR BAD ASS WRAPS CUZ I KNOW YOU GOT EM lol

im j/w whats with all these concept names that come out of texas ( i assume cuz i hear them from you and sparrow mostly) that are super azn / japanese ie bushidos, jittens, bonzais and last but no least and i know this isnt japanese but it is azn korean yo yos lol im not trying to be racist or imply anythign im just like where the fuck r all these names comming from lol

HAHAHAHA I havent really noticed that until now lol.
Not to sure man thats just what we call them:)

Love the video man it seems like it could be a little smoother at times but I love how slow you spin and if you work out some of those kinks/when it's going well you're really fluid with your stringing. As cheek said I think adding some movement/dancing/whatever you wanna call it would make everything come together amazingly well but I'm glad you didn't overlay the music cause I could tell how you were stringing along with the beats which is something I love to see haha.

Also I think even though the slow spinning is great, if you used some music that switched between slow and fast and then got your spinning going faster/slower with the music it would be great because it seems like it was getting repetitive but varying the tempo could probably help you a lot with that.

I'm not great so I can't really critique your actual stringing so take what I say with a grain of salt as it is your stringing but I think just get more into it and really get your body moving and you'll be ten times better just from that.

LOL my new goal is to create a new concept and call it the ninja turtle!

hahaha nice

good stuff! if i offered any kind of criticism it would be that you should work on your flow more! I could tell that though this is your first video its not your first rodeo. you got some awesome moves man! Also 8 minutes is long imo especially because i saw a lot of repeat moves. you got some sweet stuff though and i love dub step so much that i had to smile at your music choice. ha ha. keep at it!

ya i have been working on my plane control alot, ill keep the whole moving thing in mind, i normally dont have too much space to move around though, i moved alot of crap out of the living room to make the video but thanks for your input man

haha ya i had no idea it was 8 min long until i looked at the video and i didn't want to shoot another, also i have never been to a rodeo but im down to watch some people fly thru the air. if you like dub step you should talk to sparrow he is my dubstep source

thanks alot on all the input man, ya i hope to have some kinks worked out on my one year video i also want to bust out some new wraps on it too. and i also need to work on that manip like you said

Everything was really sweet, some of your wraps seemed like you weren't too comfortable with though. Smooth those out a little bit and you'll be dynamite